Comic script feedback

2021.10.20 03:05 MelancholyCauliflowr Comic script feedback

Hi you creative masterminds.
During lockdown I crafted and drew a short comic with help from amazing people on here expecting nothing of it. Just having pride that I'd done a comic...
Well now there's a chance it might be published and I'm freaking out as drew it before I wrote it.
Here is my current script.
I'd love any feedback that you can give.
Thank you so much!!!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/112_AYnofd5guGgq-VbWFnba05uVoM9rS/view?usp=drivesdk
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2021.10.20 03:05 Legitimate-South-809 Trade for Japan or other countries ditto

I have a US shiny ditto
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2021.10.20 03:05 KazakhLivesMatter Минутка истории. 31 марта 1954 года СССР отправил ноту западным странам с просьбой о вступлении в НАТО.

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2021.10.20 03:04 Dimdoul2142 Kryuger

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2021.10.20 03:04 Phantom18013 A Dangerous Game Quest

I just…..
All of that chaos…for three freaking gwent cards.
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2021.10.20 03:04 twitchtvDDAMAJED Creeper joined chat

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2021.10.20 03:04 AutoNewspaperAdmin [Politics] - Some ANC councillor candidates in hiding amid political killings spike in KZN | IOL

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2021.10.20 03:04 AutoNewspaperAdmin [Politics] - Digital Vibes: Top 5 claims made by former health minister Zweli Mkhize against the SIU | IOL

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2021.10.20 03:04 Particular-Ad-8831 My boyfriend is depressed and I don’t know what to do.

(We are long distance for the time being) My boyfriend recently started a new semester of college and all seemed really well until he got really busy, so I gave him his space and then we didn’t talk to much for about two weeks. But now he’s severely depressed and I don’t know what to do. We barley talk and when we do it’s typically the same conversation of ‘How are you?’ Over again everyday. We used to video call all the time but we haven’t in like a month and he just seems so distant and far away. Even on the days he seems better we rarely talk. I love him so much and I just want him to be happy but I’m scared that maybe he just doesn’t want me around anymore. He doesn’t make time for me, and rarely tells me he loves me. I have thought of bringing it up but I know he’s having a really hard time and I don’t want to pressure him worse. Do I just wait it out for a while and see what happens or am I supposed to just end things so he can focus on himself? We used to video chat and talk for hours everyday and he seemed so wonderful and genuinely seemed as he loved me dearly. How do guys typically handle depression?
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2021.10.20 03:04 AutoNewspaperAdmin [ZA] - Digital Vibes: Government spokesperson sues SIU and the Sunday Times for R500 000 | IOL

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2021.10.20 03:04 knowledgeable_diablo Vape reporting disappearing from news sites

Anyone notice the large article on ABC Australian news this morning regarding an open letter to the WHO by the world authorities on Vaping calling out the WHO’s and Australian Governments lies and crap being sold as chocolate has suddenly disappeared and nowhere to be found.
Very interesting article debunking almost every single negative item raised and clung too by the WHO to justify their stance of zero smoking and zero vaping but “please take as much nicotine gum as you can stuff in your mouth” type advice.
Just been scrolling for a while and seems it’s been scrubbed completely from their site to ensure no one notices that EVALI was caused by Vit E additive to THC vape oils, and that about 1% of vapers start off as non-smokers or non-vapers this totally distorting their “epidemic” mantra they’re screaming at all levels to justify the push to try and globally ban e-cigs, vape juice and anything not fitting into the top tax tobacco bracket.
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2021.10.20 03:04 StevenKurry ALGS NA Top 10 Power Rankings

  1. Spacestation Gaming (12 series points / 73 round points)
Players: Dropped, Frexs, Xenial
Team Comp: Gibraltar, Caustic, Valkyrie
Preseason Ranking: ↑ 4
Group: B
Week 1 Stats: 34 Kills, 14,427 Damage
Spacestation Gaming earns the top spot over the field for winning the “Lobby of Death” of Group AvD. Current #1 Pred, Dropped (16 kills, 5k damage), impressed the ALGS Power Ranking voting members (of 1) with his solid play during his 1st game with his new squad after taking a few months off committing to Content Creation post the Rogue split. So far the teams decision of swapping Claraphi for Dropped is paying dividends, as is Frexs (12 kills, 4k damage) decision to switch from M&K to Controller. SSG’s hours put in grinding Apex Ranked as a squad has paid dividends.

  1. Sentinels (12 series points / 92 round points)
Players: Lou, Crust, Senoxe
Team Comp: Gibraltar, Bloodhound, Octane
Preseason Ranking: ↑ 7
Group: C
Week 1 Stats: 54 Kills, 20,995 Damage
Lou's emergence as the Sentinels IGL shined through in Week 1 as his shot calling along with the combination of 2 of the scariest mechanical players in NA wiped the floor of the (softer) Group BvC lobby. Sentinels decimated the entire match, laying out a devastating 54 kill output (a 9 kill per round average!), 92 points overall, and most impressively outscoring 2nd Place Noble by 34 points. This is the team to watch in Week 2 as Group C matches against Group D with the likes of SSG, ESA, G2, 100T, Complexity, Torrent, and SHEEESH filling out the lobby. The storyline I'm most excited for is to see if Lou can shed his "mechanically talented" label into being undoubtedly one of the greatest IGL/players in the game.

  1. Esports Arena (9 series points / 57 round points)
Players: Verhulst, SkittleCakes, Dooplex
Team Comp: Valkyrie, Caustic, Gibraltar
Preseason Ranking: ↑ 13
Group: D
Week 1 Stats: 30 Kills, 13,690 Damage
Esports Arena aka Team Intel aka Dudes Night Out seemingly came out of nowhere during the ALGS off season to place an impressive 2nd place in the "Lobby of Death". Current #2 Predator, SkittleCakes & #11 Predator, Dooplex show that maybe there is some value putting in the work in ranked. IGL Verhulst set the tone for the team with 14 kills. They benefited greatly from having all of Lava City, Big Maude, and Dome — will they get chall’d in the future? Week 2 will provide more clarity to where the team stands vs the field and can claim the #1 spot by outscoring both SSG and SEN in the C vs D matchup this weekend.

  1. Noble (9 series points / 58 round points)
Players: FarmerLucas, ImpulsiveDreams, Rakkinishu
Team Comp: Wraith, Bloodhound, Gibraltar
Preseason Ranking: ↑ 20
Group: B
Week 1 Stats: 25 Kills, 16,307 Damage
IGL FarmerLucas led the Esports Arena alums to the most consistent team in Pro League Quals. The consistency continued last week as they were able to power through to another 2nd place finish. Let’s see if they can continue the momentum going as the top team by series points in the AvB matchup.

  1. SHEEEEEEESH (7 series points / 51 round points)
Players: NiceWigg, iiTzTimmy, Apryze
Team Comp: Gibraltar, Valkyrie, Caustic
Preseason Ranking: ↑ 10
Group: D
Week 1 Stats: 30 Kills, 13,339 Damage
100T NiceWigg, COL Apryze, and fan favorite iiTzTimmy show that content creators can compete with the best of the signed pro teams by securing 3rd place in the most gruesome AvD lobby. Apryze sneakily led the team in frags. With their strength in team fighting and decision to not scrim I wouldn’t be surprised if they finish first or last on any given week. I’m rooting for the former as their play style and comms make for million view content.
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  1. TSM (4 series points / 45 round points)
Players: ImperialHal, Reps, Snip3down
Team Comp: Valkyrie, Gibraltar, Caustic
Preseason Ranking: ↓ 1
Group: A
Week 1 Stats: 27 Kills, 14,956 Damage
CompApex and Twitch’s most beloved Apex team started their day strong with an unsurprising win, but later cooled off with consecutive early round eliminations. As many members of this subreddit have commented, they just seemed a bit off from their usual excellence. Expect a turnaround performance and a potential character swap with Hal on Gibby, Reps on Caustic, and controller god Snipe on the less ability focused Valk in week 2.

  1. Cloud9 (5 series points / 46 round points)
Players: ZachMazer, StayNaughty, Albralelie
Team Comp: Octane, Bloodhound, Gibraltar
Preseason Ranking: ↓ 3
Group: A
Week 1 Stats: 29 Kills, 14,214 Damage
The CompApex community’s favorite punching bag (#Justice4Knoqd) fragged and outcoached the field to a 4th place finish. Albralelie proved his worth by co-IGL’ing the team to some impressive finishes down the stretch. Mac, Zach, and Naughty are no where near their final form.

  1. SXG (7 series points / 48 round points)
Players: SlurpeeG, Xednim, Golden
Team Comp: Wraith, Octane, Gibraltar
Preseason Ranking: ↑ 12
Group: C
Week 1 Stats: 31 Kills, 15,650 Damage
SXG aka AimAssist v2 proved themselves in the Pro League Quals to being the most feared all controller squad since G2’s emergence. Former Season 10 #1 Pred Xednim continues to impress me as a competitive pro and your favorite streamer’s favorite controller player SlurpeeG didn’t let his pro fans downs with his Week 1 performance on Wraith. They’re playing with house money so far with their 7 series points.

  1. RNG (5 series points / 46 round points)
Players: Vaxlon, PowPow, Saucerorr
Team Comp: Bloodhound, Gibraltar, Octane
Preseason Ranking: ↑ 9
Group: B
Week 1 Stats: 24 Kills, 15,314 Damage
The new Bowswerr-less RNG continues to do what they did in ALGS season 1 and that’s fly under the radar and place consistently in each match.

  1. Complexity (3 series points / 39 round points)
Players: Monsoon, Reptar, iShiny
Team Comp: Wraith, Valkyrie, Gibraltar
Preseason Ranking: ↑ 8
Group: C
Week 1 Stats: 16 Kills, 13,002 Damage
The originators of the Gibby/Hound/Wraith Edge Meta look to reinvent themselves a bit in ALGS Season 2. Although falling a bit short of their lofty achievements in SummeFall of 2020 look for the Cute [BOYS] Club to rebound in the still wide open Season 2.
(note: I was originally going to do a whole 40 team run down, but truthfully I didn’t expect this to take so much of my free time this week! will iterate and try to post again after week 2)
(note 2: this is all for entertainment purposes and some of these rankings were definitely to get some dialogue going within the community :) Feel free to comment with your own personal Top 10!)
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2021.10.20 03:04 humanrightsforu unpopular opinion

Idk if I’m alone in this but I’m not a fan of pickup lines. I know you used that same line on 10 other girls you matched with. I would prefer just a simple “hey how’s your day going?” Vs “I’m on the phone with Spotify support because I don’t see you listed as the hottest single of 2021” “theres 20 letters in the alphabet right? Oh I forgot u r a q t” like please please I prefer originality. Pickup lines are cute but really a simple question about my day is a message I’ll answer 10x faster than “you dropped something —my jaw”.
Unpopular opinion maybe so I know I’m gonna get downvoted and nasty comments to high hell and that’s ok.
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2021.10.20 03:04 jookco Gordon Lee Death - Obituary - Dead News : Such a sad day to hear of the passing of Gordon Lee. He took this picture of my son Noah back in 2005. Click link to read full story.

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2021.10.20 03:04 KithMyAirs What is something everyone should be doing but no one actually does?

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